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Oh Moon my inner soul
Bright light, come to me
I howl, cries filt with grieve
I am no wolf
Only once a month I
long for your touch.
I love you,
despite you...I hate you!
Carress me please!
Oh Moon my inner soul
is torn apart.
I am no wolf
I cannot keep up.
So tired...
I spit on you, fear you
want you fully...
oh please, oh lovely Moon
send me free...
©2004-2009 ~Karen-Beranov
:iconkaren-beranov:

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Wolvenziel

Ik kijk in je ogen, en zie de ziel van allen die jou voorgingen.

De generatie die jou geleid hebben langs dit pad door eeuwen heen.

Jij volgt dezelfde sporen.

Zingt hetzelfde lied.

Hun herinneringen berusten op waarheid.

Hun instincten leven nog even sterk, in de ziel van de wolven.

Je ogen staren naar de verte.

Is het een oude herinnering

Got this one...somewere -_-'

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:iconyamitohikari:
A beautiful piece of poetry. I don't mean to piss you off or anything, but I thought you might want to know that carres = carress, and "long for you touch" should be "long for your touch". The spelling errors kinda take away from the beauty of what you wrote. I really like it! Keep up the good work!
:iconkaren-beranov:
oops...those are stupid spellingmistakes...problably found their orgin in my Dutch orgin. Thank you!

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Let them say I walked in the time of Hector, tammer of horses. Let them say I walked in the time of Achilles.
:iconyamitohikari:
Hah, no problem. You're very welcome too!
:iconijin:
meep! :clap: so beautiful! Touching
I was startingto miss your poems! mreow! :heart:
:iconkaren-beranov:
:bow: Thank you, thank you ^.^ Sorry I updated not to much...ghe, kind of a depression I guess. But thank you:!: :D

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Hallo! Met Hannah Diekstra...Ik heb loast suukerstoed bij u kocht, moar doar soaten allemoal pittn en groanen in. Is dat wel goed?
:iconmy-soul:
its wonderful..i really like the "i am no wolf" lines. great job ^.^

--
Calvin : You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes : What mood is that?
Calvin : Last-minute panic.

:mangapunksai: .::Ariana::. :mangapunksai:
:iconmaevesem:
dit gaat toch niet serieus over je hamster he?!?!
anders heb ik geen andre keuze dan je af te maken en te zorgen dat je David W. loos sterft

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Yours Truly.
Jack the Ripper.


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:iconnorwayfox:
Werewolves...
*happy sigh*
This is so amazing, Karen!Oh, I love it SO much!
You're so talented.

--
"Sunday is God's day, not the Devil's."

"To be one with the sea
Is to fly on broken wings."
:iconkaren-beranov:
Ow...Gehehehe...THANKS! ^.^ :hug:

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Hallo! Met Hannah Diekstra...Ik heb loast suukerstoed bij u kocht, moar doar soaten allemoal pittn en groanen in. Is dat wel goed?

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